Zack - TS# 15 (Hang-ah)

For this session, Hang-ah again requested that we work on her writing skills. As with the previous session (chronologically) I came up with a set of prompts and asked her to write a very brief argumentative essay (200-300 words) on one of the topics. 


Here is a link to the document we used, including the prompts and the essay:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jjlZmjTIxTLKl80hv78SUI-tsvyAe3TGcZ7yrBFlrkU/edit?usp=sharing

The prompts and essay that she wrote for this particular session are the second set on this document (where she wrote about looting and BLM)

After she finished writing, we went through the essay together, and I provided her detailed feedback on grammar, form, style, and so on. Especially problematic sections of the writing were highlighted in yellow and corrected.

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